Creatii personale

Sorana wrote:Off-topic: Apropo, cred ca ar trebui sa fie o sectiune de creatie pe forum, pentru povestioare,poezii, cantece, desene and stuff:)

Daca vreti sa ne aratati creatiile voastre, puteti posta aici. (Pentru desene avem un topic separat)

Bn,uite cateva dintre creatiile mele aici:
A lost way to happiness
Somwhere in my past,
As I remember,
I loved him more than never
His eyes caught me in a love spell
He did it so well
I never wanted to break it,
But it broke itself.
How I could forget his eyes
Blue like sea,cold like ice?
How I would not remember
His long blonde hair
What was shining like the sun?
I don't know how he done,
But his words were making me mad
I was never sad,never sad
How I could be sad?
When his red tasty lips
Were making me dreamin' at each kiss?
When the wind rose his hair
And his eyes were shining like two sparkling stars?
It's so unfair,so unfair.

Now I'm walking on a wierd way
A lost way to happiness
Only he can show me the road
Back to it,back into love warmth

I wanna see him now
Why he's not coming?
Why he's not here?
Why he's not kissing me
When I need him?
Only a black rose,
Everything what remain as a bitter memory,
But it will fade one day.

Now I'm walking on a wierd way
A lost way to happiness
Only he can show me the road
Back to it,back into love warmth


Maybe,babe....babe
If you would come
My nights would be filled with the love's lights
My days would be perfect.
If I would play with my hand in your hair
You would sing to me a everlasting love song.
If I would see your eyes
Maybe I wil swim in the sea of love,
But the sea is not enough
To drown my pain
To calm down my heart when it burns.

Now I'm walking on a wierd way
A lost way to happiness
Only he can show me the road
Back to it,back into love warmth

In the night hold me tight
I'll give you eternal love,
All you have to do
Is to give yourself to me
I'll give myself to you
And I'll show you
A love that you can't forget an eternity.

E dezastruoasa,stiu,dar sper totusi sa va placa.

maria96 wrote:Bn,uite cateva dintre creatiile mele aici:
A lost way to happiness
Somewhere in my past,
As I remember,
I loved him more than ever
His eyes caught me in a love spell
He did it so well
I never wanted to break it,
But it broke itself.
How could I forget his eyes
Blue like sea,cold like ice?
How I would not remember
His long blonde hair
That was shining like the sun?
I don't know how he did,
But his words were making me mad
I was never sad,never sad
How could I be sad?
When his red tasty lips
Were making me dreamin' at each kiss?
When the wind rose his hair
And his eyes were shining like two sparkling stars?
It's so unfair,so unfair.

Now I'm walking on a weird way
A lost way to happiness
Only he can show me the road
Back to it,back into love warmth

I wanna see him now
Why isn't he coming?
Why isn't he here?
Why isn't he kissing me
When I need him?
Only a black rose,
Everything that remains as a bitter memory,
But it will fade one day.

Now I'm walking on a wierd way
A lost way to happiness
Only he can show me the road
Back to it,back into love warmth


Maybe,babe....babe
If you would come
My nights would be filled with the love's lights
My days would be perfect.
If I would play with my hand in your hair
You would sing to me an everlasting love song.
If I would see your eyes
Maybe I would swim in the sea of love,
But the sea is not enough
To drown my pain
To calm down my heart when it burns.

Now I'm walking on a wierd way
A lost way to happiness
Only he can show me the road
Back to it,back into love warmth

In the night hold me tight
I'll give you eternal love,
All you have to do
Is to give yourself to me
I'll give myself to you
And I'll show you
A love that you can't forget an eternity.

E dezastruoasa,stiu,dar sper totusi sa va placa.

Am corectat niste greseli gramaticale, sper sa nu te superi, cred ca e bine sa te corectezi inca de pe acum ca sa nu mai repeti aceleasi greseli
Cat despre cantec( e cantec, nu? xD), parerea mea e ca nu e deloc dezastruos, imi place ca ai bagat si niste rime pe acolo, mai ales in prima parte.Tema poeziei imi aminteste de ce scriam si eu in urma cu cativa ani Cred ca ai talent, keep writing si de abia astept sa vad si alte creatii de-ale tale!

Thanks Kinga pentru sectiune


Am sa postez si eu cateva poezii... am observat ca poeziile cu rima nu prea mai sunt apreciate , versurile albe sunt mai 'cule', dar sincer nu imi pasa, eu nu pot sa scriu fara rima pentru ca nu imi place ce citesc dupa aia, am impresia ca sunt in stare de mai mult xD
Hope you like them...


Frunze uscate

Nu te mai ascunde de adevar,
de lumina, de viata...
In fiecare zi e dimineata,
dar e alta-n fiecare zi,
la fel ca mine, ca noi.
Nu vezi? Nu stii?
Sunt alta mereu:
aceeasi inauntru, intotdeauna.
Vrei adevarul?
Detin doar minciuna.

Asteapta in continuare:
ascunde-te, arunca-te, zbate-te
pana gasesti o alta minciuna,
o alta clipa, o alta parte
a unei vieti pe care
nici nu stii cand ai pierdut-o...
Ti-o mai amintesti oare?
Respir-o. Ascult-o.
Aminteste-ti. Uit-o.
Poate-a fost fara sa mai fie.
Sufletele cad:
e toamna tarzie.


Zborul

Imi amintesc franturi de lumina,
ca dintr-o alta viata.

Te-am pierdut?
Nu. M-am pierdut.
E scris pe florile de gheata
un cuvant, un singur cuvant
al copilariei mele.

E scris pe buzele tale,
pe soare, pe stele.
E scris in mine.
E scris in negru.

Si viata-mi striga: nu pleca!
Totusi, hai sa zburam, n-ai vrea?
Spre alte lumi, spre alte stele,
necunoscute, negre, grele.

Vreau sa zburam. Vreau sa plecam.
Oriunde, oricand, oricum,
dar nu aici, nu acum.

World map

Craving for those bright blue skies,
black and white are colours for some eyes.

Ever thought your love is overwhelming?
For her, it didn't yet stop raining.

Did they ever think we're different?
Every flower spreads around another scent.

Each of us sees life in different ways,
we have different plans for escaping this maze.

And yet, my thoughts are hanged once with the moon,
a stranger born too late or born too soon?

Multumesc!
Uite alta,e o fabula:
Doi magari
Fabula,fabullita
Statea un magar la margine de ulita
Si unul de departe veanea
Cu o incarcatura grea
Spatele zici ca i-l rupea
Istalalt numa ce radea
Catre el grai asa:
"Da de unde mai si vii?
De la moara,de la secera,
De la arat?"
Si la toti l-a aratat
Si dupa aceea asa cuvanta:
"Prietene,prietene
De te-ai da ti cu un pieptene,
Tare bine ai mai arata
Lumea de sa mira
Dara tu areti de zici ca numa povezi grele din spate pierzi,
Si cu pielea ta ce e?
Zici ca ti-au roso mustele"
Tot asa il batjocorea
Magarul pe cel care muncea
De zile nu mai manca
Ca sa indeplineasca porunca
Cea mai de pret,
Ca doar primea si el nutret.
Se duse magarul acasa
Si se puse la masa
Si el ce manca
Numa ce se gandea:
"Cat am sa-l mai ascult oare
Pe dobitocul cela mare
Cu gura mare
Cat doua ogoare?"
A doua zi tot asa il batjocorea
Magarul pe cel care muncea,
Numai ce se mai smucea
Magarul repede sacii de moara in spatele celuilalt arunca
De toata ulita radea.
Asa e in viata,
Toti radem de cel ce se scoala de dimineata,
Dar cand povara e a noastra
S-o ducem nu putem,
Numa in spatele altuia s-o punem.

Cred ca stiti morala.

ah...si eu scriu. mult. mult. Dar din pacate - proza (desi imi plac mai mult poeziile ). Voi posta aici una dintre ele, mai scurta, dar cand voi avea timp (editand mesajul)

suomi_rocks wrote:ah...si eu scriu. mult. mult. Dar din pacate - proza (desi imi plac mai mult poeziile ). Voi posta aici una dintre ele, mai scurta, dar cand voi avea timp (editand mesajul)

Nu e nevoie sa editezi mesajul daca faci posturi consecutive in zile diferite, ideea e sa incerci sa nu postezi un mesaj dupa altul in aceeasi zi

Povestea poeziei

<<Sa fie Lumina!>> a zis Dumnezeu si in clipa aceea am fost plasmuit si eu, iar Domnul mi-a ingaduit sa traiesc printre ingeri.
Odata ma plimbam prin Rai, insotit de fluturi si pasari, si am ajuns la marginea unui nor. Dedesubtul lui am vazut un poet adancit in trudnica munca a creatiei. Din mainile lui ieseau sentimente cu ochi albastri, flori si stele... Am fugit imediat la El, L-am luat de mana in fuga si I-am aratat poetul.
-Ce este acela si ce face?
-Este un poet, un roman, mi-a raspuns Creatorul. Asemenea Mie, el creeaza lumina si intuneric, lumi si sentimente.
-Dar ce rost are el pe lume?
-Iti voi spune, dar sa ma asculti atent... La inceputul lumii, romanul avea sufletul incarcat, dar alinare-i erau numai plansul si rugaciunea. Eu, simtind preaplinul care spargea sufletele oamenilor, am creat poetul. Asa a aparut si doina, modul cel mai cristalizat de exprimare al romanului, si dorul, sentimentul acesta puternic care incape in sufletul omului. Am creat poetul pentru ca lumea sa Ma simta mai aproape. Poetul insusi e poezie. Parca-l vezi cum se destrama in versuri si in rime, umpland foaia goala a cerului de pasari doinitoare.
Atunci L-am rugat cu lacrimi in ochi:
-Cand ma trimiti pe Pamant, Doamne, Te rog sa ma faci poet in Romania.
-Asa sa fie! a zis Dumnezeu binecuvantandu-ma.
Si m-am nascut. Am venit pe Pamant intr-o familie iubitoare si, ca fiinta efemera ce sunt, am doinit dorurile tarii, am spus basme, si Scrisori, si Luceferi, si File din poveste despre un Calin...eram poet!
Cum ma cheama, ma intrebati? Sunt Eminescu...
In miez de noapte, cand deschid ochii, realizez ca nu a fost decat un vis, dar unul inedit: am adunat cate putin din umbrele trecutului, am trait prezentul si am privit viitorul. Si nu mai era nici ieri, nici azi, nici maine; era doar o clipa de eternitate - clipa in care Eminescu mi s-a aratat undeva, intr-un peisaj de Rai, si mi-a spus povestea lui...povestea unei poezii...


Stiu ca este cam ciudata, am scris prea mult la inceput despre Dumnezeu, despre Rai si chestii din astea, dar asa mi-am imaginat eu situatia (era o compunere cu titlu dat)

Am compus un catec nou,inspirat de titlul albumului NW cu acelasi titlu.Ideea de baza a acestui cantec e nebuniile care ma apuca cand fata lui Emppu pe youtube in videoclipurile NW .


Dark passion play

Ah,when I look in your eyes
I loose the control over my body
Are you freezing me in a dark ice?
To unfreeze me and to play with my mind
To blind me with your charms?
You make me to be dazed with your words

Ref:Don’t let your mind to be a barrier,
Don’t let your body to be an unpassable wall,
Don’t let your heart to be a tree, is too tall!
In a dark way,
Let’s play!
A dark game,the dark passion play

You’re so tempting,
I know you would be the perfect sin
A desire what blows togheter with the vulcano
Of my heart,of my heart
A fire desire,
You play with my mind and set me on fire
Your lips are taking me higher
To the sky,so,let’s fly!

Ref: Don’t let your mind to be a barrier,
Don’t let your body to be an unpassable wall,
Don’t let your heart to be a tree, is too tall!
In a dark way,
Let’s play!
A dark game,the dark passion play

Just talk to me,
With the time you’ll be all mine
I can love you an infinity,
If you will show me just a tiny bit of love.
Baiat:Tell me what you see in me?
Your eyes are catching me
Like two dark claws
Your body is a fire trap
Your lips two poisonous webs
Your love is so hot
Your spidersilks,I’m already caught
Come with me,run with me away
In a dark way of a crazy passion
Catch me in your seducting fire trap
Take me up with your dark claws
Catch my heart in your fire webs,
Take me to the land of love.
Baiat:My heart is on fire,what you waiting for?

Ref:(baiat) Don’t let your mind to be a barrier,
Don’t let your body to be an unpassable wall,
Don’t let your heart to be a tree, is too tall!
In a dark way,
Let’s play!
A dark game,the dark passion play

Baiat:You caught me,
I cannot break free,
Your words are like a dark spell
You did it so well
You caught me,
Don’t realease,love me,make me mad
Make me crazy,I’m already dazed
Ref:(in cor) Don’t let your mind to be a barrier,
Don’t let your body to be an unpassable wall,
Don’t let your heart to be a tree, is too tall!
In a dark way,
Let’s play!
A dark game,the dark passion play

Si eu am compus o poezie, dar nu i-am gasit titlu...vechea mea problema - nu gasesc niciodata titlul potrivit

I'm afraid...I'm so afraid I gathered in me
the echo of too many steps
and I'll poison myself with my own feelings...

I'm an unknown harbinger of a lost dream,
I'm the yesterday's calling,
I'm the first song of the night,
I'm the life's child and the beginner of a new road

I feel my wings strained to fly
But I know I didn't practice enough...

Whirling, restless,
The horizon's sea flows in my hands

Urmeaza alte tentative:

Am umblat candva
in universuri albastre,
pe coame clipind imaginea
lumii...
cu vantul, cu panzele,
cu jocul furtunii...
____________________

Azi inchid in a mea geana vesnicia
si pictez pe ceruri arse un zambet.
Culeg un trandafir aprins
Si-l daruiesc cerului ca sa zambesc,
Azi inec in vise doru-mi stins...
____________________

As vrea
sa pot sa fiu lumina
si sa plutesc prin raze
si prin vis,
prin stele,
printre ingeri,
sa pot sa fiu foton si doar atat,
sa ma absorb in aer din neant
si sa cunosc abstractul,
sa pot zbura la infinit printre nori,
sa fiu doar eu
si raza
si o stea.
Sa pot pasi, usor, pe cruce
si sa ma absorb in ea,
iar in vartejul imaginilor ce-mi vor aduce aminte de ce-a fost,
de viata,
de uman,
sa ma intind in constelatii,
acolo sus,
si sa uit.
Sa uit de tot si de toate.
Sa pot fi fericita...
Voi fi a soarelui,
a stelei,
voi alerga prin vene de lumina,
iar,
daca voi cadea,
voi sti sa ma ridic din miliarde de atomi de praf
si sa ma regasesc.

^ Imi plac mult Si povestioara imi place, stai linistita, nu e ciudata, sa scrii despre Dumnezeu nu e ceva ciudat in opinia mea
Nici eu nu gasesc ( sau..erm..nu caut) titlu aproape niciodata.


Una compusa 'la vrajeala'. Nu prea-mi place , da' merge.

tot ce crezi ca sunt e ceea ce am fost candva...
acum te uiti cu ochi nevazatori la umbra mea.
poate viata a fost fara sa mai fie-
lumina rece, adiere vie,
prezent ce-acum a devenit trecut.
acum astept.respir si-ascult
cuvinte goale si promisiuni uitate.
am uitat tot ce vroiam sa fiu.
am uitat . e oare prea tarziu?

tot ce crezi ca sunt e ceea ce am fost candva...
privesc prin zid. mai pot oare simti ceva?


Alta:

Oare de ce nu poti sa-ntelegi ce simt
fara sa-ti spun?
Sa cuprinzi din zbor , in palme,
lebede de fum.

sa asculti tot ce tace si sa zambesti,
sa-ntelegi fara cuvinte,
sa iubesti.


sa nu dispari dupa prima ninsoare.
sa nu mirosi parfumul fara floare.

de ce nu poti sa te trezesti intr-o dimineata,
si sa-mi spui, in gand, cat ma iubesti?
sa zbori gandurile nezburate,
sa respiri lumina, s-o traiesti.

de ce nu existi doar pentru mine?

Vampire kiss

Through the eyes of the innocent girl
Is passing a dark thought
In her eyes are reflecting the stars
It was like a war between the light and the dark
And then a tear was draining slowly from her shining eyes,
But what words could bring the joy again?
When a vampire kiss released him by the dream,by the human sin
Blaming and cursing she fell like a heavy rock on the floor
But what spell can bring him back
When a vampire kiss released him by the dream,by the human sin
Their love could be read in little girl's face,
But now a poisonous vampire kiss
Two greedy and athirst for blood lips
Took everything:
The love,the joy
Then she said to herself:
"Why is he gone?
Why I'll be all alone?"
A frozen heart must live for her,
The innocent girl.
A soprano dazed in the dark lyrics of death
Is singing now to her lonelyness.

Asta am facut-o despre Tarja

My angel

I was walking one day
And then suddenly I saw an angel
With a perfect voice
She was so beautiful
And when she sang it was like all dark inside me has perished
And all the sadness her voice has banished
It's like she muted me
I couldn't speak
I was so weak
I couldn't even move
Her voice caught me
I wish I could stay there an infinity
To listen to her
And then the only words I could say were:
"She like an angel fallen from the sky,
Like a mysterious queen,
Like a misstress of light"
So beautiful and so pure
Her song was like a spell
And then she suddenly stop
But I didn't heard because I was still caught
She watched me and then I woke up
I just watched in her eyes
She was more than an angel
She was more like a dream
Like a goddess from another realm
Like a queen of the northen mountains.
Her name was Tarja
Such a beautiful name she has.

^Wow, chiar te pricepi.
Ar trebui sa i-o trimiti Tarjei, pentru ca pe forumul oficial nu mai stiu cine vrea sa faca un alt proiect pentru Tarja, pe care sa i-l dea candva prin septembrie. Si toti putem sa ii trimitem poze, poezii, desene, pe care apoi le va pune intr-o carte, iar cartea i-o da Tarjei

suomi_rocks wrote:^Wow, chiar te pricepi.
Ar trebui sa i-o trimiti Tarjei, pentru ca pe forumul oficial nu mai stiu cine vrea sa faca un alt proiect pentru Tarja, pe care sa i-l dea candva prin septembrie. Si toti putem sa ii trimitem poze, poezii, desene, pe care apoi le va pune intr-o carte, iar cartea i-o da Tarjei

multumesc! chiar am sa i-o trimit Tarjei!

Ok aici e alta care mie imi place moolt de tot dintre toate creatiile mele:

The moment until you will heal

I'm waiting for you to come
To heal my heart
To heal my pain
Please don't watch me like a stranger
Don't tell me that you don't remember
Our first kiss
The moment when we fell in love...
Just hold me
Don't be fill of lust
"Leave now
I will follow you
It's nothing as I can do
To bring back the love"
"But I'll wait, I will
The moment until
You will heal
My heart,you'll drown my pain".
But fallen on the bed of death
Her last words were:
"I'm so alone
He's not coming?
Not even when I'm dying?
Not even when I'm gone?
I'm all alone
Only me and the walls"
When his mind woke up was too late
The death caught her eyes
Frozen her in the dark ice
He ran upstairs to see her for the last time
"Get away her soul is mine
You will never see her alive
You'll blame me in the dark
But won't have her back"
But she'll be waiting the moment untill
He will heal her heart.

^Wow, chiar te pricepi

suomi_rocks wrote:^Wow, chiar te pricepi

.multumesc!

Eh,aici e alta poezie de-a mea:
The light fairy

With the light steps
She steps on the water of the deep blue sea
Her eyes are sparkling like two blaming stars
The war between light and dark starts
Steping on the elven river
She just start to shiver
The tears of silver
Were falling on her gentle face.
The deep dark blue ocean
Was throwing sad waves
Giving 4 to the wolves
Feel this sadness in the sky
A wolf will make a step of fortune
The sadness what down will mourn
Making dark in the tomb
Dark in the elven land
And her eyes are crying
The cadence,that strange feeling,
The light fairy,
With black wings
Stuck by the pain's claws
The wind won't take her away from this dark.

diana17rock wrote:desenele despre care am vorbit mai devreme ..

nu sunt de calitate prea buna, pentru ca nu sunt scanate.....https://i.servimg.com/u/f89/13/99/28/40/dsc04113.jpg
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Ah, nu vasusem ca ai pus si desenele astea. Chiar voiam sa iti sugerez sa le postezi Le ador

@Maria96: Tu produci poezii la minut . Imi place asta (si faptul in sine, si poezia)

asta am compus-o de ceva vreme, si, desi nu ma prea pasioneaza poezia, m-a luat o stare ciudata si m-am apucat de scris

Once there was an emotion,
Once there was perfection,
Once there was a nightwish.
In 2007 it became some trash,
It was all gone in a flash
Like it was never truly there...
A god cried and died,
Illusions simply vanished.
An old friendship doomed
By a blind man’s creed.
Their honor ripped in pieces,
Never-ending whipping tears,
Blaming the beloved diva
For being some deceiver.
An innocent heart
Crawled in dirt,
A goddess’s voice
Deserted by choice.

doar lipsa de ocupatie

Interesant
Acum serios, imi plac mult ultimele patru versuri

ma simt atat de mandra *hero*

suomi_rocks wrote:



@Maria96: Tu produci poezii la minut . Imi place asta (si faptul in sine, si poezia)

ms!

Ok,aici e alta:
I lost an angel

Please,release
Release me from your dark webs,
The webs of pain
Do you like to see me crying?
Do you love to feel my pain?
Do you like to see me so unhappy?
I know,I lost you
I know!
I lost you,my blond angel
But now,only the death can set me free
Why have I to pray for my death?
I know there's another way,
But I won't find it
Until you're gone
I will feed my lonely heart with your pale memory
I can't even remember your face,
I wait for a light,even a little one
To banish my dark
I'm lost in the dark,
But an elven path would show me the way?
Who would cry for the century child?
I just can't forget that game,
The dark passion play
There's no sunlight to shine upon me,
The sun is sleeping,
There's no angel to guard me,
The angels fall first,
There's no love,no feeling,nor touch,nor kiss,nothing
The ocean soul cried once,
But it' my time to cry
Just tell me why,
He's so high in the sky
And I'm here to cry
I wish to feel his touch,
I to feel his love,
I want him to be here,
But I lost an angel,
I lost him,my blond angel.
Nor happiness,nor love left in me
So hard fell on my soul
The day when you left forever,the day when you told me:
"Rakastan sinua,mutta tauko ".
You just closed your eyes for infinity,
Just come and set me free.
Please,release me.

Aici e alt cantec de-al meu,dar nu-mi place refrenul

Don't leave now

Don't leave me now,
Don't go away,please,stay just one more day

Don't leave,
Not now,not now
When I'm starting loving you,
Not now,not now
When I'm starting feel for you,

If you would leave now,
You would wound my heart,
You would take all the love from my soul.
(If someone would ask me
"What you choose?
The life or your beloved one?"
I would say 'I choose life',
But you'd upset because you are my life")

Don't leave,
Not now,not now
When I'm starting loving you,
Not now,not now
When I'm starting feel for you,

Love me,touch me,hold me and kiss me
And let me solve the mystery,
The mystery what is hidden in your dark heart
Let me beat the drum that can set free your mind
Let sing the song what can make light in your mind
And then sing for me the instrumental of our passion
And let me love you,
Just stay one more day
(One more day give me to love you)

Don't leave,
Not now,not now
When I'm starting loving you,
Not now,not now
When I'm starting feel for you.