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ms,Wishmaster!!!
da,magnolia,nu ma deranjeaza,dar am o conditie:sa-mi zici ce efect a avut smecheria.
acum am inceput sa abordez titlurile luuuuuuuuungi,ca de ex:

Forever healed,never heard

Forever healed it's my sadness,but not heard
I want to know where is the love
My wounded heart needs healing
Only vain words
Are screaming in my ears!

It's not easy to say
What I feel for you,
It's nothing more,than love
But unhealed is my soul.

I'm only the thing what you keep in shadow
But I'm only a ghost
Of the love I used to carry for you
I just want you!

I'm a lost soul
You are the fallen shadow of my past
Your kiss is my wish,at least!

zici ca nu ma pot opri din scris

Shadow Angel

I:The Ghost

A smooth voice whispers at my ears
A gentle hand holds mine
A gentle pair of lips caress mine.

A grave is here in my yard
I don't know who's
Maybe my hope's

A grave is here in my yard
I'm so scared
Who's grave is my court?
It is not mine,maybe my hope's.

I'm lost in the maze of my own fear
I step out
In my court is the grave of our love,
But why you are forever sleeping?
Wake up,don't stay
The hope-everything what remains at last to slay.

II:Dead Boy

I know that you have fallen
In this war,
Death brings a new life
The life never brings new hopes,
For me it brought pain
I search for you,lonely singer
All this for you,but in vain!

Why you are affraid of me?
I ask myself,but now I see
You're dead and I'm alive
I'm a dreamer with wounded heart,
You're a ghost with unbeating heart.

You are my last hope for releasing
Take me away
I ask you to show me the day
When I'll see the light
What will bring me back to you.

III:Hidden

"I hide away from world
Because I feel alone,
You brought back my hope
But I'm only a dead sea-serpent
Which swam the seven seas
Only to find you!
But your too locked in yourself!"
I wish to see the sense of being so dark
When you know there's no spark
You see me alone,
You wash my tears with your smile
You always take care of my heart
When it asks you to
I'll never leave you,
I love you,dead boy
Your heart still beats for me
You have to seek inside yourself
The last seed of love that remained.

He turns away,
"I loose my words when you radiate
You look at me with warmness
I feel that something in me is beating,
Alive girl,bring me back
I feel for you,
I promise,I won't just use you."

I will bring you back,
But you have to remain with me
Because my feelings are higher than my passion for you
I love you,dead boy!

IV:Love has no age!

Love has no limits,love has no age
It doesn't matter if you're dead and I'm alive

"I feel the life in me again,
Thank you,my only-love"

They say we're too young,
We don't understand,
But we know our love is strong
You're my dark prince,
I am your princess!

Your love is now alive
As same as you
Take me away in night
I'll be your guide light!

asta e cea mai recenta inspirata de Emppu,e a 24-a,cred ca am sa fac un roman cu ele

noh,bun...............acum imi fac curaj si postez poezia asta,e ciudata,parca nici eu nu inteleg de ce i-am dat titlul asta ,dar nici versurile nu-mi dau o incredere super ca as intelege ce-am scris

Love is a war

The love is a war
Between the hate and the friendship
Between devils and angels
The love is a flower
For me,it fade too soon.

I feel so weak,
But I know I am an ordinary girl
I can't stop it,
The death is a thing we can never cancel
We can't deny,we all die
But I feel absent in this world
It's like I already died.

If I am only a lost hope
You're a stranger for me
Nothing more,only a black-sea shore.

e veeeeeeeeeeeche poezia................

acia e una recenta...mai exact de aseara de la ora 2:00

The Fallen

It's so hard to see
Why it's happening,
Why it's war?

You are now there
You should never be!

You fell now on the battlefield
You could never find the heal
For your pour lonelyness

You fell now
I feel you'll go now,
Rest forever,
Rest in peace!

I feel heartbroken
That I couldn't save you
My beloved,you should never die!
God,take me,not him!
Mother,say good-bye!

I wish to understand why I'm now so empty
Why you left?
Why you died?

acuma vad ce tampenii am scris

M-am gandit sa va arat o poezioara pe care am scris-o acum ceva vreme... Nu se compara cu ale voastre, dar poate n-o sa fie chiar mort minutul pe care-l veti pierde citind-o... (prietenii stiu de ce!...)

Cine sunt eu?...

Sunt caldura pe care o doresti, infrigurata...
Sunt pasiunea pe care o simti, incitata...
Sunt lacrima pe care o plangi, melancolica...
Sunt zambetul pe care-l gusti, fericita...
Sunt viata pe care o respiri, exaltata...
Sunt energia pe care o consumi, excitata...
Sunt privirea pe care o adori, satisfacuta...
Sunt obrazul pe care-l simti, iubitoare...
Sunt inima pe care-o asculti, alintata...
Sunt pieptul pe care torci, rasfatata...
Sunt gura pe care o saruti, infierbantata...
Sunt muzica ce-ti bucura sufletul, linistita...
Sunt Soarele ce-ti mangaie trupul, somnoroasa...
Sunt apa pe care o bei, insetata...
Sunt ciocolata calda pe care o sorbi, zgribulita...
Sunt umarul pe care te sprijini, deznadajduita...
Sunt speranta pe care o tii strans, incoltita...
Sunt sarutul, sunt bucuria, sunt vraja, sunt dorinta pe care le simti, indragostita...

You'll NEVER Walk Alone!...

e frumusica....

doamne, cat de mult imi plac adjectivele... e cea mai profunda poezie pe care am citit-o (pe langa "avem timp" ) cine-i eminescu? imi da o stare aparte; trebuie sa recunosc ca a doua oara cand am citit-o, am citit-o ca si cand mi-ar fi fost adresata mie, din partea unei mai vechi cunostinte. si se pliaza atat de perfect pe sentimentele mele, poate din cauza asta imi place atat de mult. si pare atat de personala, desi aparent e adresata unei "persoane inexistente, unui ideal"... fiecare vers, fiecare cuvant, imi poarta sufletul pe culmi, ma face sa ma gandesc la tot ce e frumos... strict frumos... as putea sa o recitesc din nou si din nou, si tot nu m-as satura; as gasi un nou inteles de fiecare data... speechless

da.........e minunata,victor!

@Victor: Se pare că toţi se subapreciază pe aici..
Poezia este genială, îmi place foarte tare cum ai potrivit epitetele/stările.
Revelarea propriei fiinţe este posibilă în prezenţa fiinţei iubite... Îmi aminteşte de foarte departe de "Cântec", a lui Nichita Stănescu; cred că sentimentul pe care mi-l provoacă...

Eu şi hartia ne-am apucat de critică literară.

victor welcome to the club
super poezia

my latest poem:

Just a voice

I'm just a voice
The voice that whispers in your ears
The voice which calls you
The voice of a phantomatic love.

I'm affraid that you're not listening to me nomore
You're just cold and distant
I call you,only your love will bring me back to life

But you will never be the same
The distance between us is too much to cope
The only difference is that I am dead,you're alive
You care about me nomore!

You think that if I died
I don't feel for you
Because my heart is not beating?

You're so wrong
You don't know that the love I carry for you
It's the only thing what makes me feel alive
Even if I am only a ghost.

Your charming eyes
Your hot lips
Took me in the 9th paradise
But you don't listen my call now.

I'm the shadow of a lost love
You're making my soul be peaceful
With you I find my rest
Without you I'm only a little phoenix baby lost in it's mother nest.

Scorpions,trupa preferata a mamei au o melodie intitulata 'love is a war'?????
My God,nici ca am stiut!

victor_uzum wrote:M-am gandit sa va arat o poezioara pe care am scris-o acum ceva vreme... Nu se compara cu ale voastre, dar poate n-o sa fie chiar mort minutul pe care-l veti pierde citind-o... (prietenii stiu de ce!...)

Cine sunt eu?...

Sunt caldura pe care o doresti, infrigurata...
Sunt pasiunea pe care o simti, incitata...
Sunt lacrima pe care o plangi, melancolica...
Sunt zambetul pe care-l gusti, fericita...
Sunt viata pe care o respiri, exaltata...
Sunt energia pe care o consumi, excitata...
Sunt privirea pe care o adori, satisfacuta...
Sunt obrazul pe care-l simti, iubitoare...
Sunt inima pe care-o asculti, alintata...
Sunt pieptul pe care torci, rasfatata...
Sunt gura pe care o saruti, infierbantata...
Sunt muzica ce-ti bucura sufletul, linistita...
Sunt Soarele ce-ti mangaie trupul, somnoroasa...
Sunt apa pe care o bei, insetata...
Sunt ciocolata calda pe care o sorbi, zgribulita...
Sunt umarul pe care te sprijini, deznadajduita...
Sunt speranta pe care o tii strans, incoltita...
Sunt sarutul, sunt bucuria, sunt vraja, sunt dorinta pe care le simti, indragostita...

You'll NEVER Walk Alone!...

Cred ca aproape am inceput sa plang. E superba. Imi plac e mult de tot. Bravoo!

[quote="suomi_rocks"]Urmeaza alte tentative:

Am umblat candva
in universuri albastre,
pe coame clipind imaginea
lumii...
cu vantul, cu panzele,
cu jocul furtunii...
____________________

oh...an old poem...numai ieri l-am gasit printre miile de caiete de versuri pe care le am

Fallen Lord

Where is the suavity of flowers?
They all fade!
Where are the cherry flowers floating in the garden?
They are all dead as black roses
Where are the snow-flakes on your lips?
The kisses turned to an endless ice!

You feel,dear?
Can you feel the winter's cold?
You're a fallen lord
I am a fallen girl
Fallen at your grave stone
You're now forever gone
I am everlasting alone!

Where are you cold lips?
Where is your warm love?
They're all gone,but I remain
The wind flows through me
I'm not even feeling alive,
I fell on my way
Where you are now?

Fallen,
Over and over again
You were the devilish temptation which burnt me
Now you are the pale memory
Lost in mystery!

I feel so lifeless without you
I am the emotion which calls you
Your lips are now untouchable
Your heart is now unbelievable:
You love me no more!
I will walk alone
Between the cherry dead flowers.

maria96 wrote:



Asta am facut-o despre Tarja

My angel

I was walking one day
And then suddenly I saw an angel
With a perfect voice
She was so beautiful
And when she sang it was like all dark inside me has perished
And all the sadness her voice has banished
It's like she muted me
I couldn't speak
I was so weak
I couldn't even move
Her voice caught me
I wish I could stay there an infinity
To listen to her
And then the only words I could say were:
"She like an angel fallen from the sky,
Like a mysterious queen,
Like a misstress of light"
So beautiful and so pure
Her song was like a spell
And then she suddenly stop
But I didn't heard because I was still caught
She watched me and then I woke up
I just watched in her eyes
She was more than an angel
She was more like a dream
Like a goddess from another realm
Like a queen of the northen mountains.
Her name was Tarja
Such a beautiful name she has.

Abia acuma am observat-o pe asta. E un cantec sau o "poezie"?

e o poezie

Asta e proasta rau de tot, dar a oglindit exact ce simteam in seara asta. (NU e o poezie, e un fel de cantec) nu am vrut sa o fac poezi fiindca stiu ca e proasta si nu se poate compara cu orice poezie...prin urmare am decis sa fie cantec. Nu imi place sa scriu pe engleza in general, fiindca am senzatia ca pe romnana suna mai frumos si mai expresiv dar in seara asta am fost chiar trista asa ca a iesit pe engleza.

Once in my fantasy
I would compare a mountain
With my dream...

The dream I had that lovely night
That lovely night, without a heart
By my side
Lost trough the winds of light...
That dream of him, that dream of a dream...

Now i realize
Everything was a dream, hopeless dream
Of fading friendship
Of true friends love
A dream, a hopeless dream, dreaming a dream...

That lovely night, dancing with the one
I tought I could never dance with
And seeing that true love dancing with another...

I felt the rain in my heart,
The dry in my soul...

Lost forever, trough the winds of a dream,
A dream, hopeless dream
Dreaming a dream...

magnolia,zici ca ai reprodus fidel cateva din versurile mele!
este super poezia!

maria96 wrote:magnolia,zici ca ai reprodus fidel cateva din versurile mele!
este super poezia!

NU E O POEZIE.

magnolia,zici ca ai reprodus fidel cateva din versurile mele!

N-am vrut. Versuri de-ale tale de unde? Chiar nu am vrut.Si nici nu mi-am dat seama. Stiu ca seamana un pic cu ceea ce scrii tu, fiindca e un stil raspandit care a cam ajuns destul de banal dar eh... Eram suparata rau si asta a iesit.

magnolia,zici ca ai reprodus fidel cateva din versurile mele!

N-am vrut. Versuri de-ale tale de unde? Chiar nu am vrut.Si nici nu mi-am dat seama. Stiu ca seamana un pic cu ceea ce scrii tu, fiindca e un stil raspandit care a cam ajuns destul de banal dar eh... Eram suparata rau si asta a iesit. [/quote]
that dream of him...asta as fi scris si eu

Aha... Da pai...tii minte ca am spus ca imi place de unu..noh despre el e vorba, si acum ca mi-am clarificat sentimentele pentru el, si sunt sigura de cea ce cred si simt pentru el...(complet altceva decat am crezut mai ainainte) s-a intamplat ceva care chiar m-a intristat. Si am scris asta.

in sfarsit un cantec scris de mine care sa-mi placa!

Day Dream

I just stay with the pencil in my hand
Even if he's not here,I feel him
His presence just eclipses the poem which lies in my deeps within
Just a poem I try to write.

I day dream
I day dream of him
He rocked my world
I can't even write a word
On my empty paper.

'Cause a devil and an angel
Are fighting in my mind!
But,wait!
What happens to my heart?
Oh,yes,nobody wins
My angel wings are already burnt
My devilish horns still hidden apart
My angel crown easy falls
I just faded all good's petals.

Just can't control my heart
It just makes me write
Things that I don't mean to say
Now what I can do?
I just can pray
That my heart could just one time hear
The voice of my symphonic tear.

I recognize that I day dream
Of him and only of him
If there's anything else that could be written
Would be only words to vain
To cry my pain
But I feel wonderful
I'm sick of the taste of painful.

asta o sa fie primul cantec pe care-l inregistrez ever!!

pai na, nu e rau...so....succes!

mi-a luat 3 luni sa-l termin pe asta......pur si simplu am ccrezu ca-l arunc la gunoi,dar ceva m-a facut sa-l tin,ideea principala,ideea ca pot continua,mie asta imi place cel mai mult dintre toate scrise de mine...

Sacred night

Have you ever said what you feel?
Have you ever lied?
Have you ever felt
That even if you live on Earth
Under your feet is an earthquake
Only because you're crazy in love?
Have you?

I just wish to understand why
Why you long for me?
My heart choosed another!

I just look deep within your eyes
Give me one more night,the lonely poet said to me
But I can't my heart belongs to another.

Just steping out of the empty room,
His heart begging for my love
My heart begging for someone else.

My pride will only push me to sin
Hearts beating for me
But I'm such a withchy thing,never touched
I'm just a simple dying ocean soul.

My tears,my loveletters,but
I said too much lies
Only for wounding,not for healing
The wound which bleeds harder
The wound of a loving broken heart.

The earth was shaken one time beneath my feet
My heart begs for his love
I'm now just a dead-fallen sinner in the rain
The water drips on my thorn body
The water drips touching my heart,
Before it will slowly fade.

I never said what I feel
I only hide my emocions
In ocean's slow motions.

Now my nights are so cold
I lost them both
One of them died in time's whore
Another one's love for me exists no more!

Just cry, blond angel, no more
Saints will take the pain away
Now I beg for your light
It's too late,it almost fade!

A sacred night I wish
And then to die
In his arms
Would be the last thing to feel: his heart crying

And before I become one with the ocean soul
Love me once more
And then let me die on the shore
They call me again!

The ocean souls waiting for me,
Your eyes breaking ym fantasy,
But I know
very well
I lost the game
I wish I could find a way
Through life's love traps.

Someone tell me
Why everything is all against me?

Someone come and easy my pain
My prayer is in vain
Nobody hears
Nobody knows my tears
For who they fall
They just drown my heart
In eternity's thorn apart!

super Mary!Bravo

ms mult!