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Post by hartia on Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:56 pm

te intreb de editura, ca nu stiu deocamdata pe nimeni Razz o sa mai caut, poate dau de ceva. o sa iti dau add pe mess, sa vb mai multe, daca e ok Wink
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Post by maria96 on Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:42 pm

aici e o poezie care am compus-o cu mult timp in urma,e una din favoritele mele

The Fairy's Diary


She took everyhting away
She wrote anything that happened that day
The way she fell in love
The way she fell in sin,
The way she lived the dark dream.

Only a lonely heart,
It's the only thing he left to me
Now I write in my diary,
In my fairy diary
The way I felt the taste of sin,
The way he trick me!


Now that she wrote,
She know it still lives,that's her hope
It never dies,it only lies.

aci e una mai 'lonely' Very Happy

Ravean's cry

Crying at my grave,
That's my ghost,
Crying for the hope
You'll bring back the love
Once I lost
I hear your reaven's cry
Why you cry for me?
Or for the fact that I don't live anymore?

I still remember the heart of stone you had
I'll never let you part,
I waited for you,
But you didn't come
I loved you,
But you didn't love me,
I never fell under the dark sins of yours,
But you fell under the darkness's dark poison,
I never blame you
But you always did.
I never let you part
You're always in my heart
You always take it with cold feelings
But I hoped that you'll come back to me,
You could set me free,
Now that I died,you cry
Tell me,my love,why?

Crying at my grave,
That's my ghost,
Crying for the hope
You'll bring back the love
Once I lost
I hear your reaven's cry
Why you cry for me?
Or for the fact that I don't live anymore?

I still hope,I still dream,
It's your fault,you fell under the sin,
You gave me this dark dream
Why I cried for you?
And you didn't care!
You didn't undertsand!
You didn't see my pain!
I still feel the same for you,
Do you feel the same for me?
Tell me that your eyes are not lying,
Tell me that your feelings are real,
Tell me that you're not tricking me,
Why don't you come to set me free?

Crying at my grave,
That's my ghost,
Crying for the hope
You'll bring back the love
Once I lost
I hear your reaven's cry
Why you cry for me?
Or for the fact that I don't live anymore?

I'm sad,you know that
All I need is your touch!

Crying at my grave,
That's my ghost,
Crying for the hope
You'll bring back the love
Once I lost
I hear your reaven's cry
Why you cry for me?
Or for the fact that I don't live anymore?
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Post by kuolema on Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:10 pm

Time

I have 30 days and counting
Nothing to say,nothing I can change,
Winter will come
But it won't be the same
Our life changes,
Only time is to blame.

We never felt so alone in our lives,
As we sit and we wait for time to go by.
And we are fighting a force
We can't understand,
How can it pass us,
And when will it end?

We must walk on the path
That lies ahead.
There are no crossroads
And no turning back.
But the road turns darker..
...It all fades to black...
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Post by maria96 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:29 am

Bye Forever

Bye forever,my love
You're dying in my helpless love
You're dying brave in my weak arms
The great white phoenix,
Where our love will end,
If not even the death would make it stop?

Your life will end in my arms
No cure for your wounds
You just fell in the battle
For saving this land,not me
I'll always love you,
My fallen love,
I'll always miss you,
My fallen!

I still hope for you,
I know you won't live
You still love me,do you?
I wish I could save you,
But you're dying in my helpless love.

I wish I could hold you once more
I wish I could feel your touch,but where my sad soul would find it's rest
If you're dying?
Why you leave,why?
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Post by OceanSoul on Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:44 am

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Mary,asa ti-ai propus tu????sa ma faci sa plang??? Shocked Shocked Shocked e foarte faina poezia,de ce trebuie sa-ti moara 'dragutul'? Mr. Green
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Post by kuolema on Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:53 am

wow..chiar foarte faina ..felicitari!
apropo urmatoarea poezie ti-o dedic tie sper sa-ti placa Razz

One winter's night
I can here your voice from far away
Calling me everyday
My night is restless
My dreams are gone
I know the music has long stopped
When we fell winter embrace us
The past is unwrapped

One winter's night
Driven by light
Carols we singed
Charmed we have felt
No pain or shame
No love no hate
One winter's night
Far back in time

Sweet child you'll learn
What no one has know
I'll be by your side
On that same winter's night
To show you the light
Grab my hand
Don't let the story end.

One winter's night
Two souls lost in time
We closed our eyes
With death by our side
Angels embraced
Whine we have tasted.

One winter's night
My child you'll find
Hope is not dead
Soon it will spread
Chains will be braked
Daemons will pay
On one winter's day.
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Post by maria96 on Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:38 pm

wow,e foarte frumoasa,e cel mai dragut lucru care mi l-a facut cineva pana acum :love: e superba,o ador
"Sweet child,you'll learn
What no one has know" e foarte draguta,(acum zic asa in gluma putin) heh,nu stiam ca voi invata atat de muuuuuuuuuuuulte Mr. Green
oricum,m-ai lasat fara cuvinte,e minunata :love:
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Post by maria96 on Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:56 pm

Daca se mai intreaba cineva de ce sunt deprimata,here's the answer

The Drowning Day

Nobody understands my pain
Even if I loose or win the life's games
Nobody cares!
Even if I die
Nobody cares!
Even if I cry
Nobody cares!
They see me as a curse
But they don't know!
They don't know!
My drowning days,
My ways,my sins,my innocence!
I wish to die
All they tell me is a lie!
Always!
I wish to flee
They hate me,
I hate them too
They see me suffering,
TThey don't care
I die,better than to live for nothing
I want to die
I want to fly
They still lie!
I wish to get out of time,
I hate them so much!
Why would I stay?
Only to see the next day sunlight?
I'd better drown in a bitter sea,
I'd swin the seven seas,
Nothing will stop me,
Not even the Overseers!
Let me die!
Let me fly!
Time to drown
I wish I could understand
Why they have so much hate
For the fact that I live!
Let me die
Let me fly!
I wish to see the reality
Let me see
Why I'm locked?
Why I'm kept in chains?
Tell me now
Why I wouldn't drown?
Only to slay the hope for a better tomorrow
Nobody cares of my sorrow,
Tell me:why would I live?
I wish to die,
All they tell me is a lie!
Nothing will stop me,
Just let me fly!
I wish they could see
How the things are
Nobody sides with me!
Where is my protector?
Why I am living?
Where is my protecting angel?
Where is the warmth I seek?
Why it died?Why not me?
Why my hope?

Tell it apart
Tell it apart,
Share my love to you
You don't know what I'd do
Only to touch you.

I need one love night
Just tell it apart
The rainbows of my lost childhood,
The clouds of my wasted happiness
The winds of my wrath,wasted love.

It worries me,I'm loosing myself in you
The ground turning around
When I dreamed of you
The love tasted,
My childhood wasted,
Still no happiness there
Still no love.

So much hate,I have to cope
So much light,I have to cope
So much ones who hate me,I have to cope
So much ones who love me,I have to hope
So much greed,I have to cope
So much light,I have to hope.

Still no love,
Lost in time,
Yet wish to leave
But where I'll go?
I don't know
Who will defend me?
Nobody.
Who will love me?
Nobody.
Who will love me?
My angel.
Who is mt angel?
The one who gave me life?
Who will cry for me?
No one.
Who will give me a caress?
No one wants.
Who will hold me in warmth of love?
Nobody.
Who will care about me?
Nobody.

Tell it apart,
I stilll wish wish to drown!
Tell it apart
I wish to flee!
Tell it apart
I wish to die!
Tell it apart,my angel?
I wish to see my angel in this dark
Why I have to cope all this?
Noboby sets me free?
Nobody cures my disease?
Nobody will take my hand to lead me through the darkness?
Nobody will take me home?
Where is the home of my heart?
Why I have to cry only because of a lie?

They say they love me,
But they don't!
They say they care about me,
But they don'!
They say they care,
But they are not!
Tell it apart!
Where's my angel?
Nobody wants to giveme a caress?

acum nu mai intrebati!
serios,pe mine nu ma intelege nimeni,fetele de la scoala asta din Helsinki spun ca eu gandesc ca un adult doar pentru ca eu stiu sa compun poezii mai 'speciale'
acum sper sa intelegeti.
spuneti-mi emo,spuneti-mi cum stiti,dar asta e motivul tristetii mele. No
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Post by Magnolia on Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:02 pm

^Deci, uite parerea mea: Per total imi plac poeziile tale, dar imo scrii atat de multe si de asemanatoare, incat isi pierd un pic din magie, si din chestia aia speciala pe care o au, eu as lasa-o mai moale. Very Happy
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Post by maria96 on Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:36 pm

Magnolia wrote:^Deci, uite parerea mea: Per total imi plac poeziile tale, dar imo scrii atat de multe si de asemanatoare, incat isi pierd un pic din magie, si din chestia aia speciala pe care o au, eu as lasa-o mai moale. Very Happy
eh,lasa daca alea erau asemanatoare erau singurele Twisted Evil
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Post by Magnolia on Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:39 pm

Laughing Laughing Laughing Ma rog, cum spui tu. Alea mi s-au parut mai slabe ca cele de pana acuma. :!: :!:
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Post by OceanSoul on Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:11 pm

Magnolia wrote:Laughing Laughing Laughing Ma rog, cum spui tu. Alea mi s-au parut mai slabe ca cele de pana acuma. :!: :!:
poate asta e parerea ta,mie imi plac toate,mi se par perfecte toate!
e ca si cum m-ai pune sa aleg versurile piesei preferate Nightwish!
si sunt toate geniale de exemplu:
"Sad we live,sad we die"
"Your beauty cascaded on me
In this white-night fantasy"

mie toate imi plac!
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Post by maria96 on Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:55 pm

ms,Mariana!
acuma nush ce naiba am,dar numai acum 30 de minute mi-am terminat ultima compunere Mr. Green
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Post by maria96 on Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:58 pm

of,asta e una din rarele poezii care imi plac! pot sa zic :I did my best! sunny

The Eyes of A Poet

I'm looking replies to my endless questions
Questions what are surrounding my mind,
I'm looking them in the eyes what cry,
The eyes of a poet.

The line is the tear he throw
The poem is the feelings he felt
The words are the silver rivers of his mind.

If I look for sadness,I look in the teary eyes of a poet,
If I want love feeling,I look in the fallen in love eyes of a poet,
If I want darkness,I look in the dark eyes of a poet
If I want elven lands,I look in the eyes with an elven watch of a poet
But if I want answers,where I look?

The love what takes the innocence away
The love what brings the sin,
The love what brings envy and jealousy
Who will prepare me for it,
If not the poet who goes throw it?

The death what takes everything,
The death what takes the ones you love
The death what takes your joy,
Who will warn me about it,
If not a poet who knows the way is death?

I take the pen in my hand
Only to write empty words,
Only to throw empty tears
Empty like the inside of mine.

I don't wish to die
I don't wish to love
I don't wish to cope
I don't wish to fly in the sky
All I want is someone to prepare me for the life what's next to me
Because I feel unprepared for the feelings inside me,
My dear poet,cry just once for me
Tell me:
How's death?
How's love?
Why the sin comes throw love and goes throw death?
Tell me:
Why I wasted my time wishing to die?
Why?
My dear poet,take my hand
Take me anywhere you want
Just show me the kingdom of my childhood
What I lost too soon.

ei,acuma m-am vindecat de dorinta mea de-ami lua viata,cand ma gandesc ce duuuuusa eram What a Face
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Post by maria96 on Thu Dec 17, 2009 9:22 pm

Am incercat sa scriu una in finlandeza,doar cateva strofe,asa ca,pretty plizzie cei care sititi finlandeza mai bine ca mine corectati,ca eu nu sunt sigura daca am scris corect fiecare vers.

Rakkaus

Miten tunsin sinulle
Kukaan ei voi tuntea
Edes täydellinen prinsessa
Edes nymfi rakkauden itsensä

Miten minä rakastin sinua
Vaikka sinulla olisi palata
Tunteeni on kuollut sinulle
Sama olisi rakkautta Jatkossa
Sinulle, vain sinulle
Syvällä sydämessäni

Miten outoa olisi minun yötä
Ilman mitään tunteita, ilman rakkautta
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Post by Guest on Thu Dec 17, 2009 9:58 pm

Maria, deci uite cum sta treaba... trebuie sa mai lucrezi la faza cu gramatica... :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: , scuze, dar, nu m-am putut abtine....nush ce ai scris acolo, dar stiind de ce esti in stare, sunt sigur ca e de 10!!!!

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Post by Magnolia on Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:54 am

^Arata frumos, ce sa spum, dar nu inteleg o boaba. Laughing Laughing Cum e Finlanda? cyclops
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Post by kuolema on Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:40 pm

asta e oficial cea mai ciudata poezie pe care am scris-o.... Shocked un dialog intre doua persoane importante eu si cu mine Razz

We are blind

They tell me stories,you cannot believe
Even if they do not speak.
And when I dream I fell them near
Surrounding me I fell there fear.
They never left,they are here to stay.
If only you can here what they have to say.
Revealing a path not many can see,
But why are they talking?
And why just me?

'You know this is madness?'
She whispers to me.
'No they are coming.'
'You are crazy.'
'You'll see.'
'You speak such words...'
'Yet no one believes.'
'But in your madness
What else do you see?'

I see the war that lies ahead
I see sickness,I see death.
The sky's on fire;a mother cries
She has learned she has no child.
All her love was in vain,
She couldn't protect him from the pain.
I hear there guns decide our faith.
But will the angels come to aid?

'You speak of war in time of peace?'
'I cannot help it,I can't resist'
'Pleas continue,do not stop'
'Haven't I said enough?'

I see a river made of blood
I see our honer drowned in mud.
An old man cries : 'What have we done?'
But once it starts it will not stop.
A coin is toss up in the air
But when it will fall?
Will we still care?

'You make me laugh!'
'I know I do.'
'So...This feels almost real to you?'

My friend If you could see
I do not speak of what will be,
But of the hate that felt upon
The Earth...and now it has begun.
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Post by OceanSoul on Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:43 pm

wow! Shocked e minunata
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Post by kuolema on Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:47 pm

multumesc...e singura care m-a socat si pe mine cand am citit-o la sfarsit
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Post by maria96 on Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:43 pm

my latest poem...

Spirit Whisp

I hear a hard breath
I hear steps
I see a pale green light.

It speaks my name
It asks save
It asks release
It talks to me:
"The world will fall
Under a black spot of a war."

"It already did"
I said.

"You saw this in a dream?
Or the darkness blinded you?"

You could never understand
The darkness did nothing to me
It's only the fact of overseeing:
Seeing the infinity.

"You see?
Now close your eyes,
Think of the most dear thing to you
You may loose it in the war between you and yourself"

No!
Not a war I need
I need to see again
My happiness,I could regain it?

"You'll see
You'll see
That a dark sea
Will sea will take everything"

It won't
As long the hope lives

"Your hope is dead"

I start to cry
After I looked again
Not in my mirror
Not in my horror
In my sin I could see
What the spirit spoke
The dark sea!

"The visions you have,
The spirits you see
The one you dream of
Are the answers for your questions,
Control them!"

My question is why I live,
Why I have to?
Why I cry for something,in vain!
Tell me!

"Only your preparing will be required
And you'll know,
You have no role in this fallen world"

Where I should go?

"Find the ones you love
The ones who love you too"

I sent a spirit whisp
But I have no one to call
No one will hear it!

"Find the one who says:
I'll always be by your side"

I seek,I didn't find.
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Post by kuolema on Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:47 pm

E super faina..ador poeziile tale I love you
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kuolema wrote:E super faina..ador poeziile tale I love you
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Post by maria96 on Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:06 pm

Wishmaster1992 wrote:
kuolema wrote:E super faina..ador poeziile tale I love you
Si eu bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce
Thanks guys! Hug

Black Lake

Where are you?
I cannot see you,
But,I know I need you
It's a great storm outside
I need you!

I'll drawn in my heart's black lake
Without you by my side
I feel an empty tide

It's rainy outside
It's a great dark storm
Without you I'm alone

Without you I feel only a lonely singer
You gave my life a sense
When you gave me a rose

I feel for you how I dind't felt for nobody
I love you so much,I loved no one the same as I love you.
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Post by hartia on Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:35 pm

ok, for the first time, o sa public ceva din lucrarea mea, si e primul loc unde o fac. mi-a fost putin greu sa aleg ce voi publica (desi e doar o parte din eseu), dar m-am decis. am ales-o dupa ce am citit lucrarea lui morphine, care mi-a placut.

Autorii scriu, poate involuntar, poveşti perfect aplicabile în viaţa noastră, a celor reali. Fiecare om are de spus o poveste şi o experienţă de câteva zile care i+au marcat viaţa pentru totdeauna datorita urmării indicaţiilor scenografice ale autorului. Scriitorii sunt asemenea lui Dumnezeu: creează o viaţa şi se joacă cu ea de dragul sadismului interior. Dumnezeu însuşi mă face eroina unei cărţi tragice. Nu s-a decis încă dacă va permite un final fericit sau nu. Îşi stoarce personajul de vlagă, experimentează chimicale ca pe un cobai, până când personajul, într-un moment de luciditate neclară decide să îşi aleagă singur finalul. Personajul Cristinei* avea de spus o poveste tristă. O poveste în care tânjea după un Crăciun fericit, după o zi mai fericită, după o lumea mai bună. Avea multe de spus, lucruri care i-ar fascina pe unii şi i-ar plictisi pe alţii. Într-un moment de empatie faţă de ea, am decis să mă joc puţin cu soarta şi sentimentele ei. Speram să fac un bine, şi în acelaşi timp, voiam să răsucesc cuţitul în rană, pentru a testa o teorie despre rezistenţa omului la suferinţă.
Cât vor putea îndura oamenii direct responsabili la aflarea sorţii crunte a Cristinei? Sau mai bine zis, câţi ar îndura? Fericirea câtor va fi curmată odată cu scrierea acestor pagini? Nu am dreptul să distrug fericirea celorlalţi doar din cauza momentului prostesc de luciditate.

* Cristina e personajul principal al cartii.
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