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Ai ma?? Tu crezi ca n-o sa mai vina in Romania? Si chiar daca nu o sa stai la o cafea cu ea, poti sa-i dai cartea chiar daca o vezi doar ca sa faci o poza cu ea si sa-i ceri un autograf. Poeziile chiar sunt frumoase si eu zic ca i-ar placea.

OceanSoul wrote:

maria96 wrote:

Wishmaster1992 wrote:heh... Tarja o sa mai vina...si tu o sa cresti.. sau... nu poti astepta pina la anul???nu mai e asa de mult....relax....

da cum sa astept pana la anul? pana la anul mai e o gramada!!!!
si in plus cand mai are concerte in helsinki,tot la anu' las' ca astept eu....

o,las' ca suntem in noiembrie,amul asta o sa treaca repede!

da,ms Mariana! anul asta o sa dureze el cat de putin,dar faza e ca mama s-a decis sa-mi preieie custodia si am sa locuiesc in Helsinki si ea a avut concert abia in septembrie la Helsinki
ca tot vine vorba de septembrie......

The last september

The dark clouds-surround the sky
The sun is hidden by the silver clouds
A waste ground what I'm steping
Once it was green grass and golden flowers on it,
Yes,once,lost in the time
The candence of the last september
You're leaving forever
It has no sense for me to live
Without you,my inspiration is lost.
Without your blue eyes
My heart is turning into a block of ice.
I won't ask you if you love me anymore
I'll ask you what happened with our love shore?
With our perfect endless feelings
The cadence of the last september
Leave me,I don't want to burn my heart in your last words,
But the hope rose again
"If I would leave,what sense would have?
My love for you would hurt me,
Even if you don't love me,I still hope"
"The hope is dead,but if you really love me,show me!"
Rose petals on the red-ruby coloured silk bed
The smell of candels,the passion burns inside me
Take me higher,
Faster,I'm on fire!
Give it to me,give me your love
I can take you to a place,
Into a fantasmic land
"Take me there,
But be careful,my feelings are too sensitive to burn like the dark passion inside you"
"No passion in you,more lust in me!"
"The lust what makes so dark,so tempting!"
"Let me remove the pureness what worries you"
"Do it,but,burn me,don't turn me to ash!"

Nu stiu de ce postez poezia asta,dar merge

Love's dark perfume

The beautiful angel crying
My soul is slowly dying,
I have no belonging on this world,
But crying in the tomb for a dark passion,
I can only see the reality
I'm asking myself:
Who I am?
Why I have to be keeped in chains?
Where I am from?
Why I'm so empty inside?
Winter outside,
Winter in my heart,
Surrounded by a dark cadence tide,
That's my soul,
I know your words use to help me
But my soul is dying!
I'm dying,forever crying!
I hate myself so much!
How poisonous is the life's touch
I wish I could find the place where I am from,
Where I was born,
Don't hold me in the destiny's lorn,
I wish to die in my mother's arms,
I'd know I died in my mother's cadence words
The death is my only helper
Why I have to breath this hard air?
Why nobody loves me?
Someone tell me why
The love's perfume die inside me
The only thing that keeps me alive is hope,
But it's no use,it is on dying too
I can't take that anylonger!
Let me cry to set my heart free
Let me find my beloved in the dark!

Wishmaster1992 wrote:Mah... mai ai sa te critici atita???? ia mai bine si mai scrie una...asta e frumoasa.... mie mi-a placut...(btw... asa ca un secret... toate poeziile tale ce le-ai postat pe forum.. eu le-am copiat si le-am facut un folder "poeziile lu' Maria"...dak tie nu-ti plac...fie, eu le mai citesc din cind in cind...si.. mai e ceva...fetele se topes cind le citesc din ele...ms Maria!!! )

wow! nu stiam ca am si admiratori!
pai,atunci dac le plac,you're welcome!
dar ce le place la fete asa de mult la poeziile mele?
ia uite,aici e una frumoasa,mai fericita,mi-ai inseninat muult ziua(ms Wishmaster!!!! )

Light of the sun

Light of the sun,
Shining upon me,
I wish for this time to last for infinty!

Look at the beautiful pink flowers in the meadow!
Look at the graceful butterflies flying all around,
But I can't take my eyes from that lovely prince,
With the eyes so charming,with the voice so gentle,with the touch so fine!

It's a great sunny day,
Light in my way
The pianist which plays the notes of a love moondance
The chorus of this fantasmic afternoon,
The voice for the perfect fairy dance!

The sun is shining upon us,upon our love!
The sun is shining upon you,my beloved
The sun is shining upon my heart,
Your touch made of fire
I wish for this day to last forever
Only beacause everyday I want to tell you:"I love you more than never"

Solar Ares for a war against me and the darkness inside me
Solar river for the mountain of your strenghful love
Solar goddess for a solar god!

Light of sun shining upon me,
Your smile is so charming
I wish for this afternoon to last for infinity!
Your angelic warm love is everything that I could ever wish
Let's run away!
Come on,the temptation too high,the fire too strong
Let's run to forget about everything and let's knock down everything what would stop us!

Light of sun shining upon me,
Your eyes are just burning my heart,
I wish for this afternoon to last for infinity!

Wishmaster1992 wrote:

maria96 wrote:
ia uite,aici e una frumoasa,mai fericita,mi-ai inseninat muult ziua(ms Wishmaster!!!! )

A fost placerea mea...btw, poezia ta e deja la mn in folder...ms mult... mine cred k o sa-i incerc norocul

bafta!
sper sa le placa!(mai ales daca ai prietena,o poezie de dragoste este perfecta! )

Wishmaster1992 wrote:hmmm nush, la faza cu prietena... nu cred k mai am... desi... poate intr-adevar ma iubeste?????

daca vrei compun una ca s-o "seduci"
ia vezi dak-i bun asta

Dark night serenade

Lovely harps,
Lovely voice,
Lovely violin,
A burning-passion tango

Just you and me in the light of the moon,
You and I dancing our love's tango
A blood red rose,
Tell me in dance steps that you love me,
Let the violin to play
You lead the dance,you do it in a dark way
Let the passion to burn
Now,is your turn!

Lovely harps,
Lovely violin,
Lovely voice,
A burning passion tango.

Sing to me,dear
A dark night serenade
Let the hate to drown near
Let the moon shine upon us
I'd take you in the paradise!

All you have to do is to love me
Show me your dark hidden desires
Don't drawn then in your fires.

The mirror is watching behind
The love what you hide,
The purpule princess of night.

Lovely harps,
Lovely violin,
Lovely voice,
A burning passion tango.

Sing for me,dance with me
I know your fantasies,I'll fill you with a dark rose passion
Sing to me a dark night serenade
Show me that you love me
Kiss me,hold me,don't let go.

Let me dance with you,my love
Put your hands arround me
Don't set me free,I want you to love me

Wishmaster1992 wrote:Ms mult Maria!!! sper sa mearga.... daca merge... iti raman dator

hehe,eu stiu ca la fostul meu prieten ii place mult poezia asta,fiindca e dansator
mda,asta e un cantec Nymphs of Darkness,formatia infiintata de mine

The dark side of me

It's time to run,
Time to flee,
Time to blink your eyes to see
The dark side of me

It's time to fly to the dark sky
Take me high,
But wait!
It's too late!
I got to go
To hide myself in the darkness
I'm sorry

It's time to run,
Time to flee,
Time to blink your eyes to see
The dark side of me

"You can't leave that fast!
I still love you"
"The feeling is dead"
"I won't let you go
I won't loose you in the storm"
"You got to set me free"
"No,as the darkness is filled of misery"
"I love you too,but.."

...It's time to run,
Time to flee,
Time to blink your eyes to see
The dark side of me

"It's time to see the dark side of me"
"The dark side of your gentle soul
I won't let you go!
Love me,don't set me free"
"Dear,I have to let go..."
"No"
"I love you too,but..."

It's time to run,
Time to flee,
Time to blink your eyes to see
The dark side of me

Time to flee
Time to hide
In a dark tide

"I still love you,I don't want to loose you
Do you still remember the first dance?
The first kiss?
The first night?"
"Yes,I do
Honey..."
"Then don't let go"
"I have to!"
"No,you don't"
"I'm so sorry..."

...It's time to run,
Time to flee,
Time to blink your eyes to see
The dark side of me

Mise pare mie sau poeziile tale sunt din ce in ce mai bune?
Nu ai putea sa inregistrezi intr-o calitate cat de cat buna niste cantece cantate de formatia ta? Sunt curioasa (si nu cred ca sunt singura) cum suna..

ms!ms!
pai,basista zicea ca vrea cv mai intunecat dak tot suntem "Nymphs of Darkness"
si ea a primit ce si-a dorit!
eh,la faza cu studioul,trebuie sa ne mai gandim in Nasaud nu gasesti studiou,dar avem un loc tare bunut unde sa repetam!
in orice caz trebuie sa lucram la poza de pe primul nostru album "Dark Broken Heart "
si cred ca poza ar fi cv in genul asta:

Ah, cate incercari de poezii am avut.... Si cate esecuri, cand le gasesc le voi posta cu o conditie: sa nu radeti.

Magnolia wrote:Ah, cate incercari de poezii am avut.... Si cate esecuri, cand le gasesc le voi posta cu o conditie: sa nu radeti.

Cel putin tu esti in stare sa scrii o poezie, nu conteaza cat de nasoale sunt. Eu habar n-am.

de-abia astept!
Mariana,crede-ma nu vrei sa postez "The music for my soul" e oribila am scris niste prostii nici nu vreau sa ma gandesc!
sa stii,draga,Mariana ca a fi un poet nu e asa de usor cum crezi tu!
dar,fie eu voi posta alta,mai ca lumea

The dark sea

I'm walking on the shores of the dark sea,
Waiting for his love to come
To calm down the sea storm
To ban the poisoned malicious sea serpents
I wait the beautiful fallen angel to rise.

Come to me,
Don't be afraid
I won't hurt you
All I want is to love you
As the dark shark man waits the siren
I wait for you,
But you don't know
I still wait for you in the dawn
To kiss you,to hold you.

Long hours of waiting
For you,where did you go?
Where did you hide?
If you'd watch behind,
Then watch at me looking at the ocean
I can see your face in the sun's reflection
Just once,I need that perfect emotion.

"The sun will rise again,
His love you'll regain,
If he won't come in the 18th dawn,
Just go to drawn,if you see his eyes
Freeze your heart in ice" the ocean's princess voice said

"I wait for him whatever would happen to him or to me,
If he won't come,I won't drawn,
I f I won't see his eyes,I won't freeze myself in ice,
I'll look for him"

The sun sets upon the dark sea
I can feel the breeze
Of the azure sea
Surrounding my heart.

si inca una,asta e pentru tine,Mariana,ca sa pricepi ce "usor" e sa fii poet

The dying poetry

If you would leave,
What love feelings I shall write?
When I'll see the Snow white
Of your winter touch?

Without your eyes
My poetry dies
Without your love
My poetry dies
Without you
My poetry dies.

If there wouldn't be your love
My lines are dead,
It doesn't make any sense
I would not be able to write
The poem of an old love.

maria,nu ai scris prostii,trebe doar sa ai incredere in tine

Wishmaster1992 wrote:Aha, si eu.... nu se vede??????

hm,nu
bn,fie,ati castigat! o postez!

The music for my soul

I can hear the music for my soul's silence
How silent
How perfect
The deeps within,
His beautiful watch

If the sun would shine again
He would be the one who brought it
His ocean blue watch
If he brings the sun,he does it through the music

His music brings silence to my soul,
He always calms the storm of my sad heart's sea
He makes my dark thoughts become light thoughts
Like a love moon dance,
Like the golden sun shining upon the world,
Like a fairy dancing on the water
He calms my heart,
If there's deep dark,
He makes it light
If there's a dark sea,
He brings the sun upon me,
His smile's so cute
His blue deep eyes,
If his music would get away,
Dark in my way
Storm in my deep dark heart's sea,
I would keep looking for an untouched perfect realm,
Tel me he's not a dream.

ce ziceti?

Wishmaster1992 wrote:I Like It!!!! Bravo... si, nu inteleg... de ce nu voiai sa o postezi???????????

pai,din cauza sentimentului aluia pe care inca il mai am,stiu ca o poza tare faina m-a inspirat
http://www.nightwish.com/gallery/albums/userpics/Wallpaper_NightwishSpain_Emppu1_1024x768.jpg
ma enerveaza ca n-am gasit versiunea color

The siren chronicles
I must confess I was one of them
One of the sirens,one of the damned.
We used to swim along the horizon,
We used to sing for those who divined us.
And we use to call them with or enchanted songs
Deep into the water where our power is strong.
Never has the ocean looked so dark
As in the night that I left them...
The night I first walked.
When I found the way,to break my curse,
A kiss from his lips and I forgot who I was...
But the sirens swore they will pay me back,
And when I least expected,they will attack.

The water is calm now,but I can still hear,
The call of my sisters,there voices are near.
I can see the distance in you're eyes
You have heard there songs and they cursed you for life.
The wind brings them closer,I can feel it in my blood.
They are still singing,but how can they be stopped?
I will protect you from all of there spells
Even if my journey will take my throe hell.

The moon has spin again
Illness now has spread,
Throe our minds and throe our soul
Poison now has filed our blood.
Was my sacrifice in vain,
Will you love me all the same?
Misery has caged my heart
Knowing that we are apart.

I must confess I was one of them,
But I lost my powers,when I felt in love.
And now I can't fight them any more,
My hopes are ruined
Can this be my curse?
But what is the right path I have to take,
When our love is at stake?
When the sirens start to sing
Will you listen,will you sin?

I see the ocean in you're eyes,
The is no compassion,only lies.
I can here the waves of the sees
Has all hope abandoned me?
I feel like drowning...but now I see..
Freedom means nothing
If you are not with me.

Long lost siren,what have you done?
You where a fool,love is long gone
But I know now what I must do,
They want my blood there not after you.
And with this last lines I now right
I hope you can understand
That I saved you're life.
And I know you won't remember
What my name was,
But the ocean will whisper
The the taste of my blood.

I must confess I was a siren too,
But I started a war,and all just for you.

sper sa aveti rabdare sa o cititi si sa o intelegeti

maria96 wrote:

Wishmaster1992 wrote:Si de ce celelalte 5 inspirate ink nu-s aici????

heh,pai nu le-am postat inca,sunt destul de lungi

Mary,sa stii ca mai am "If he would be a fantasy" in calc
mda,aici e una ORIBILA de-a mea,dar....,las' ca mere!

Toamna pustie

Mergea in zilele cu norii arginti
Printesa toamnei pustii
Pasea ea prin livezi
Vantul batea,frunzele care erau odata verzi
Cazusera pe pamantul intunecat.

Vantul incet ranile-mi atingea,
Si amintiri imi rascolea,dar ma uit si vad
Ca din cer o lacrima cade,
O lacrima de toamna pustie...
Doar dorul de codru ma mai invie...

sa-mi deie careva in cap,e cam naspa

eh,e tare!
sa nu carecumva sa-ti treaca prin minte sa postezi "If he would be a fantasy"!
e...prea...nush cum sa zic,ehm crek k prea... nu conteaza,am fost prea subiectiva acolo
dar o postez pe asta,e cam antik,e compusa cand aveam 11 ani,dar zik si eu ca mere!

A love fairy tale

It's this wonderful feeling,
It's what I feel for you,
The carnival of the dancing lights
You and me....two hearts.

Just let me have this dance,
After the song of fairies
Let me dance for you
Let me love you.

Let the angels to sing
Let the harps to play
You are for me the light of the day,
You're the air what I breath,
The earth is moving under my feet,
Our love and a dead gale,nothing more that lies beneath!

Wishmaster1992 wrote:

maria96 wrote:eh,e tare!
sa nu carecumva sa-ti treaca prin minte sa postezi "If he would be a fantasy"!
e...prea...nush cum sa zic,ehm crek k prea... nu conteaza,am fost prea subiectiva acolo

Sa stii k n-am sa te las in pace... vreau sa citesc poezia asta...

cit despre cele postate... bravo Mary, ca de obicei la nivelul cel mai inalt...btw, ultima pur si simplu.... i'm in love in it!!!!... e super!!!!

ms!ms!
da esti sigur ca ai rabdare pana postez 18 parti de poezie?

ok

If he would be a fantasy

I Dream of me

If he would be a fantasy
Let me keep it in my mind
Let me dream of him,
Let me dream of the perfect emotion
Slow love motion

Let me keep him in my heart,
The music breaks the wall that keeps my fantasies apart.



II Til' the light brings the dawn

Deep inside my heart
There a choir says:
Kiss while his lips are still silent
They call the nightingales to sing
Even if they are silent
Touch while the fire is burning
Nightingales come to sing
Kiss til' the light brings the dawn
Don't let this fire drawn.

III The nightingale's song

The nightingales come to sing
Just let's listen o them
While we're watching one each other eyes
Their song is like a spell
They're doing it so well
I feel I'll slowly close my eyes to sleep
In your love's warmth
If their song will spell us
How close would be the paradise

IV The ruby red dawn

How suave is the light of dawn
Every soul in love's perfume would drown
In a red-apocalyptic fantasy
Oh,how I wish you could dream of me

Just watching your charms
I know that your deep eyes
Would freeze me in a pleasant ice

If there would be dark,
Well,then you're the spark
If I would seek the light of the end of the world,
You would be the light I'd seek.
astea sunt primele 4,mai trebuie sa mai postez inca 11,dar alea le postez maine

bn,uite acuma le postez pe toate care au mai ramas,am zis ca erau 18 parti de poezie,eh,se pare ca seara matematica mea nu functioneaza tocmai bine
If he would be a fantasy

V A bitter red rose

The lights of dawn coming in our hearts
The smell of a red rose
A bitter one
It just brings perfume
Of an old unknown love

Let the dark to pass
Let the day to come
Let the touch of morning wind to enter in your feelings
It's so pure
It's so delightful
Let me fill you with fantasy

VI The dark night passion

If the fantasy would be gone
I'd cry for my soul,it would be alone
So sing for me,dance with me,take me in the sea
The siren is singing
We're walking on the golden shore
In a fantastic land of Lore
If there would be no feeling
I would be already seeking for it
In the dark silence
Slow perfumed love cadence
Hold me
I won't hurt you
I want to love you,it's all that I want to do
So,sing to me a dark night passion song
So,I'll remember it all time along!

VII The game of lust

The fire's burning inside me
All I want is you,
I can make your wish come true
All you have to do is to love me
Even if I'd have to wait for your love long time
I'll stay here and wait
For you and only for you
To play the game of lust
Just one time
I know your stone heart is invincible
But just try one time
To play a lust game
Of a burning heart
Of a burning passion
Just you and me
Nobody else!

VIII The golden rose
Your sweet watch
And your passion touch
Make me burn
If you would be something to keep
You'd be a golden rose
To plant it in the garden of heart
And to keep it there
Only to remember you

IX The blue siren of deeps

Her song so wonderful
Your watch so beautiful
The stars are shining upon us
The nights without you would be like the paradise
Without sun
Without beauty
The siren of deeps and the song of love
Sang by her on the golden shores
Of our love's sea

X The touch of lust
Your touch is made of flames
You really burn me when you touch
Only with a watch
When you still keep the silence deep
How charming are your lips
When your eyes are watching the sun
It's reflections shines
In your deep eyes
Now,let's play!
Unfreeze me from this pleasant ice!
Your touch is burning
Like the touch of lust.

XI If you would be a fantasy
If you would be a fantasy,
Go back to sleep
Dream of me
Sleep with me,
Let the nightingales to sing
For this night
Let the light to get inside
Let the silence to make the love's cadence
Go back to sleep,
Dream of me,dance with me
Love me,hold me and kiss me
Just give me love's fantasy
To keep another day
Make light in my way...

XII Night's lights
Let the light to fall asleep
Let the night to come
With my taste for the dark crazy passion inside you
Let me touch,I don't ask too much
Let me flow
In the winter's magic night glow
Let the nightingales to sing
Let the light to fall asleep
Don't let go,
I love you so much,but you don't know

XIII The distance apart
I know that if the fantasies of night
Would keep us here
We wouldn't let go,
But nope,
There would be no hope,
The distance still keeps us apart
I'm asking why....
You'd never take me high
I'm only a dreaming poet for this world
You're the perfect musician for it,
I'm only a dreamer,
You're what's in my dream's realms shines
I'm the seeker for my home
We'd never seek for it along
I'm a lost soul looking for love,
You're the one who awakes it
The distance will never let go
My fantasies,my dreams,but you don't know.

XIV A dream...
Only a dream
And a perfect realm
Only a perfect dream of us
That was the love's oasis paradise
It's all that I can keep
When I'll seek for something,
But maybe I won't know for what,
Maybe for you,maybe for my home,maybe for my love
I wouldn't let it go
My fantasies,my dreams,but you don't know
It hurts,but we have to see the maze of reality
It wasn't real
It was just a dream
My fantasies,my dreams,but you don't know
If a nightingale would tell you,you wouldn't believe
It was just a dream

XV A final kiss
One more night when you'd hold me tight
It's all that I need
A final kiss
And a lost love myth
It's all I'm taking with me
From this empty white-night fantasy
Maybe I'll know when to start to seek for something and for what,
I'll look for you
What a beautiful dreams I'm getting through
My dreams,my fantasies,but you don't know
I'll let go
It's nothing else to do
All I dream of is you

XVI A dark bitter memory
I know I'll walk on the same shore
Of our love's sea,
But I'll walk alone
It's like you'd be gone
I'll walk there only to watch the horizon
And to wait for you,
I'll try to seek you,but where I can find you?
Kept inside my heart
My fantasy would be my only wayfarer what will guide my way
To you,my lovely ray.
The dark bitter memories
Are like the night butterflies
Filled with lies
I'll wait for you...
Where are you?
Where I can find you?

XVII Time for the last hold

It's time for the last hold
Only to let this lighting bolt
To keep us apart
I know you'll be so distant
But never cold
Someone tell me why
Why I have to keep this dark sin
Only because I love him?
But there's no desire within

XIX Time to say good-bye
Time to say good-bye
Time for no cry
But how I can control my tears?
They fell like the dead bears?
Cascades of tears
For a fantastic love that my heart wears
It's not of me,it's because of my heart
This won't kill the distance what keep us apart
Now all I have to do is to hope while I'll cry
For an empty night
It was just a dream
Why because of it has to be dark in my realm?

bn,deci mi-au iesit 18 parti fiinca am luat pixul si nu m-am mai oprit

ceeeeeeeeeeeeee?
cum adik 18 parti eu stiu ca am versiunea din 2008 cu 5 parti,dar mama mia!
tu ai facut 18?

Wishmaster1992 wrote:Mary... m-ai lasat fara cuvinte...bravo!

vai, multumesc

OceanSoul wrote:ceeeeeeeeeeeeee?
cum adik 18 parti eu stiu ca am versiunea din 2008 cu 5 parti,dar mama mia!
tu ai facut 18?

Mariana draga,lumea se mai schimba,asadar am luat pixul si am editat-o putin si cum ziceam am pus mana pe pix si nu m-am mai oprit

misto poezie maria, chiar ai talent. ai pute incerca sa scrii si proza, cred ca ar fi la fel de sensibila ddar ti-ar fi mai poate ti-ar fi mai usor daca nu te-ai mai gandi la masura versurilor si la rima. doar o sugestie.

Rain wrote:misto poezie maria, chiar ai talent. ai pute incerca sa scrii si proza, cred ca ar fi la fel de sensibila ddar ti-ar fi mai poate ti-ar fi mai usor daca nu te-ai mai gandi la masura versurilor si la rima. doar o sugestie.

multumesc!m-am gandit ca n-ar fi rau sa incerc si n-a iesit ceva rau
da' mai trebuie sa lucrez la ea putinel si o voi posta...